NFLLady Posted October 23, 2016 Report Posted October 23, 2016 This is a song I wrote that I'm dedicating to the NFL. Please let me know what you think. Thank you. Quote
HoosierCat Posted October 23, 2016 Report Posted October 23, 2016 Catchy hook. But I've always been an easy mark for bubblegum pop. You have a great voice! Video shows players having way too much fun, tho. Would definitely get flagged for excessive celebration. Quote
ArmyBengal Posted October 23, 2016 Report Posted October 23, 2016 Outside of my occasional bursts of anger, i'm a pretty nice guy. However, this is terrible. The results would be far worse if made the same attempt so good on you for that... Quote
COB Posted October 24, 2016 Report Posted October 24, 2016 You were smart to come here. A good number of pretty popular music acts have gotten their start by posting some of their stuff here on Bengalszone. Thinking outside the box works! 2 Quote
COB Posted October 28, 2016 Report Posted October 28, 2016 2 points now that I've actually watched the video: 1. To start the video, you put up a graphic that reads, "Forget the world around you." Good work, most of the guys who play in the NFL will be doing exactly that about ten years after they retire. 2. The song starts out with some cowbell, but the cowbell is shuffled back in the mix when the other instruments, and your voice, take center stage. Needs more cowbell. Quote
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